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Dark Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron I fed off your peril cause of pain for so long, You ate me, swallowed me whole so deep in your abdomen, Cut my veins into tiny pieces and drown me in my blood, So that I may be your living desired sacrament. Tighten my noose and kick away the chair, I long for your fundamental feeling people try to avoid, And in the night feed me for your internal baptism, I promise I will not anticipate my fear or be paranoid. Dungeons and dragons, witches and demons, If you love me you'll let me pick one of my liking, To be honest I'll tell you what I desire most, It's to be struck by your benevolent lightening. Catch me on fire and burn me alive this dark night, But I beg do not bury my bones above the earth, Dig me so deep down that I can never crawl out, Do it quick and painful and dump me headfirst. When I arise into tomorrow's release from reality, I'll be sickened of the aftermath my head has enlisted, Put me to asleep once again for dreams I starve for, My vividly intense desires to be always dark and twisted. Laura Urbaniak November 1, 2015

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Date: 11/16/2015 9:12:00 PM
Absolutely my fav in this contest so far. Besides my own. lol. Hope you are well. SKAT
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/18/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thank you SKAT... :)
Date: 11/16/2015 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/16/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Balveen :) *smiles* -LU
Date: 11/16/2015 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/16/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Nayda :) -LU xxx *smiles*
Date: 11/4/2015 2:14:00 PM
I rather enjoyed the read, Laura - Something different! Best regards! :) john
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/5/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thank you John! Be blessed :) -LU
Date: 11/1/2015 9:02:00 PM
You're going to be the reason I have nightmares tonight..lol That's pretty darn dark.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2015 9:15:00 PM
I had to do the same thing with SKAT'S photo for her contest. Not to worry about my having nightmares. Never happens.
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Date: 11/1/2015 9:11:00 PM
Oh I hope I don't give you nightmares! I'm really NOT dark and/or twisted but I enjoyed pretendning I am for one night! ha I really enjoy when I have to think outside the box, instead of my same old love poems etc...Have a blessed night :) -LU

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