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dark colours

opening in horror
mouth severing tongue
ruptured emotions
spilling hurt
burning heartaches
teardrops of anguish
no more happiness

inside thorns tear
in torment
inside out 
no compassion
with that
of sympathy
blue cold beating
turning dark
as the rose
turns black

as petals fall
ashes of feelings
a rose dies
into embers
falling thorns
from the wound
leaving scars
upon life 

black rose
you are barred
there is no place
in your heart
so one says goodbye
to forever part

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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Beautiful pain. I often find that the deeper my pain, the more beautiful I write. I appreciated the read.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:30:00 PM
    deep colors......PD