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Dark Beneath Light

Edged beauty carved precisely The heaven pours its soul out Contrasting with the evil, beauty hides the shame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2011 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on you fine Ist Place Win in John's Contest, Sarah. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Sara, I'm so happy you like my work. Carol- thank you, it's an honor!
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this outstanding poem placing 1st in John's contest Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2011 3:15:00 AM
Congratulatins on your win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 1:35:00 AM
Thank you all, it is an honor hearing comments from great poets!
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:53:00 PM
wow, what a great interesting last line. A big congrats to you.
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:29:00 PM
Extremely happy to see you at the top Sara. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 4:03:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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