Get Your Premium Membership

Dark and Mystical

The Big Ben bangs! Reminding me its twelfth midnight Packing my things Preparing to go home Car keys on hand Off to go, outside.. I looked up to search the smile of moon Seeking winking stars even if strewn Disappointed, they have gone too soon Along the driveway, A sudden gust of wind One by one - by - one bulbs turned little from blind Whole ground now of silence and darkness cocoon Leaves of trees began swaying without rhyme Creaking and wailing sounds from somewhere Creeping coldness start to travel on my spine Gnawing hungry sounds, increasing - vibrating Lightning and rumbling thunder in pairs Scents of death arising - filling the chilled air Then suddenly................................ My car moves unsteadily.. Something heavy above.. Nails digging in my car roof.. Shadows of winged grotesque creatures To my screen shield a horrific peekaboo... rattling me. shocking me.. letting me scream.... I SCREAM.. SCREAM..! SCREAM-AND-SCREAM! yet, no one seems to answer.. Only my voice echoes back for me... Things i can only do is to.... Close and blink my eyes As I whispered a little pray'r: "If this the start of a whole new world, my God save me from this nightmare..." by olive_eloisa 2:44 am April 11, 2014 CONTEST: DARK AND MYSTICAL SPONSOR: SHADOW HAMILTON 3RD PLACE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/13/2014 8:35:00 AM
It appears I was correct, no luck required I enjoyed rereading your winning piece. This is one of the very best. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thanks much sir Chard.. :) Good evening and god bless sir..:)
Date: 4/13/2014 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful win in the contest, congratulations. oilive
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:32:00 AM
thank You Sir.. Praise God! :)
Date: 4/12/2014 11:04:00 PM
If this is the result of nightmares, you should have more of them, great poem!!!!
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:34:00 AM
thank you,. Praise God! :) hahahhaa just the other night i dreamt of my hair cut really so short like a man .. :D lools
Date: 4/12/2014 11:01:00 PM
sweet win olive, , love ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:35:00 AM
thank You Skat for dropping by.. Praise God! :) God bless you more..
Date: 4/12/2014 7:10:00 PM
Hi Olive, , Congratulations, on your awesome win.... xox~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:37:00 AM
thank You Linda.. IM glad you accepted my fb' request.... Praise God! :) i love your poems as well.. :D weeeeeeeeeee
Date: 4/12/2014 2:47:00 PM
interesting intense write Olive congrats on placing and ty for taking part hugs
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:42:00 AM
thank You Shadow for giving me a place.. :) . Praise God! :)
Date: 4/11/2014 5:59:00 PM
I do not think you will need luck, your poem is perfect!
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 3:51:00 AM
And your as we'll..:) thanks for passing by and leaving some comments
Date: 4/11/2014 11:23:00 AM
Love this creepy shivery poem Olive_eloi !! gl in the contest. // paul :)
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:40:00 AM
thank You Paul. Praise God! :) i haven;t even say thnaks to this comment you post before.. :)
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2014 3:53:00 PM
Have just noticed...the result is out and Olive_eloi is a winner once more!:) congratulations !!!!!! // paul
Date: 4/11/2014 5:24:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic images here. If this is for the contest, it is sure to be a winner.
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 11:53:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by Monterey:) Praise God:)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things