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Dark and Mystical

Night folds its shroud of darkness around me As I stand alone on the edge of the cold still water The distant moon lights a path toward the heavens, I see Clearly, I hear your whispering voice, my daughter My world lies shattered at my feet, this night Will it ever end, my pain shatters into a thousand single shards Shredding my heart, clouds gather taking all light Your departing shadow embraces me as your heart discards The love offered, blemished, tattered, torn Then the silent dark clouds part, a single star ignites new hope And in this lonely place I see a reflection reborn Confidence regained, trust renewed, and I know I will cope… April 10, 2014

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Date: 12/31/2014 6:06:00 AM
Dear Huberta: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 4/13/2014 8:32:00 AM
This is so sad, I am glad you imbedded a glimmer of hope. Congratulations on this heartfilled win.
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations Huberta on you win in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 4/13/2014 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful win in the contest, congratulations. huberta
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Date: 4/12/2014 11:02:00 PM
Hi Huberta, lovely win , love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:10:00 PM
Huberta,, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2014 2:50:00 PM
very deep intense poem Huberta congrats on placing and ty for taking part hugs
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