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Dark and Grey Night

When wise winds whispered touched the tall tree tops, branches opened like arms to welcome the silent snow. Night was all dark and grey, moon buried in loneliness, rugged roads remained restless, while wild winds whipped. In the night's silence I slipped into a dream where you amazed me with a sensuous sweet song and secretly soothed my soul. March 2, 2016 Night Silence - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 6/14/2016 10:58:00 AM
Congrats. I like your write. I'm impressed by the use of personification.
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:16:00 AM
Congrats Meenakshi, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2016 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Meenakshi. ~karam~
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Date: 6/13/2016 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi on the placement of the contest
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Date: 3/2/2016 5:11:00 PM
Nice alliteration. Loved "moon buried in lonliness". Echoed the snow fall burying everything as well as the reflection of the moon off the snow and lighting the surroundings. In short, you have a lot of imagic density which is what poetry is supposed to be.
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/2/2016 8:12:00 PM
Thank you.....you added a new dimension of snowfall burying everything...I liked that.

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