Dark Side

Dark side How can I see? When I am blind I will not remove my blindfold It is dark in my mind Scary deep, like a hole A corner nobody knows Blinded by death Sights that block my sanity Insane like the color black Store my freedom in a box Dungeons down and dim Fights I will not win Demons lost inside Angels lurk more the out side Damage the power within Damage the world without God does he exist? Devil are you in doubt? Enter my innocence Exit my violence Darken by the hate Feelings no one can relate Understand nothing Silent in the naked eye Take it all away Give it all away My pride I have none Glory does not exist All alone, lost my way Final but not yet I am found, now I see! You are here with me in the Dark Side. by;PD & Son

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2016 7:49:00 AM

You are Linda's son? I see talent runs in the family.

Michaela Dowdy

Date: 5/6/2010 6:23:00 PM

My favorite no doubt. great write. *Micheala

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 5/1/2010 3:40:00 PM

just read through the poems you have posted and i like 'em all...i think you've got a dope fresh outlook and look forward to reading more of your writing as you post it!..thanks for checkin out my poem!

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/28/2010 9:52:00 AM

very nice write and yes you are not alone loved it faleshia

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/27/2010 10:23:00 PM

darkness.it is never the way in the end.trust this, you do not want it in the end. though, dark poems are awesome.i love writing them, and i enjoy reading them from other poets.i like it.keep writing what you feel.and write more if you will for your readers.i'd like to read more of your writes Baby Boy(: -Always&Forever LYnette

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/27/2010 2:28:00 PM

Very intense, but I gotta say I love the 3rd line because in my mind it's like your choosing not to see, your choosing the darkness and I just think that's really cool. Love Destiny

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 1:35:00 PM

spooky i say, thanks for your comment let it out, write more so i can read more,..P.D.was here

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 11:54:00 AM

Intense write Baby Boy and lots of depth too... enjoyed reading your creative write.. thankxxx for checking out my poetry and the Haiku and Senryu forms are similar... and easy to write... Haiku is a short form about Nature...Senryu is about everything else ..the syllable count is 5/7/5 meaning 5 syllables first line, seven syllables second line and five syllable third line .. easy yes? so give it a try and let me know OK? luv.. "Sweetheart"

Jay Loveless

Date: 4/27/2010 11:04:00 AM

This is one of the most brilliant, amazing, beatiful....ohmi boy, im speachless really. Stopped my heart. Great frigging job. ps. cant wait to see it (; im sure itll be kick

Skat A

Date: 4/27/2010 11:04:00 AM

Yes color black rocks, use it how you want it. I see your self U seem lost. than you say at the end we are all lost. Nice dark way of putting,,Irma

Skat A

Date: 4/27/2010 11:02:00 AM

Wow! little man see U got a lot of them oldies mad. I wonder what you commented, gees now they like picking on young ones no offense, Deborah, = she will attack you with her wits . I know check out my soup mail,,I still love her little man ,,By the way thanks 4 all your kind comments,,Irma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/27/2010 10:53:00 AM

My MLK post was info I got from wikipedia--I do not know alot about MLK, therefore I went to educate myself, I suggest you do the same. That is why I posted it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/27/2010 10:50:00 AM

That's Hi! new poet LOL

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/27/2010 10:49:00 AM

I new poet...just a heads UP! If you aren't in to nature don't read haiku...because that is ALL haiku is about nature. Your verse above reminds me of many things 1st black is the presense of all color.....did you know that? If you had the prime colors red blue & yellow & mix them you get black 2nd take a peek at the lyrics to amazing grace....the writer had many many of your problems/insights/challenges..anad lastly welcome to the soup Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2010 10:25:00 AM

There lies within every man two dogs ...The one that he feeds the most wins...Intersting thoughts that you have penned..Sara