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Dark Forrest trees Guard like Thor As night falls

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 4/8/2016 4:19:00 PM

I can look up mid breath and breathe Thor's hammer...as trees sway blanketed by evenings lore. Nice!

Ke Nna Tolamo

Date: 3/30/2016 6:11:00 AM

Amazing poem.Totally love it.You're talented

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/29/2016 3:53:00 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend read from you. Loved always, bl

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 11:46:00 AM

Uwe, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 2:14:00 AM

Uwe, well expressed. Enjoyed stopping by **SKAT**

David Meade

Date: 1/15/2015 8:41:00 AM

tall and mighty are the oaks, strong hard woods are the maples, grumpy and snarly are the walnuts . . . love the forest -- the capitalization of Dark Forest personifies all the things that make-up a forest . . . love it, 7, fav