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The sky is dark. Can you see what you have done? What you caused? People look but can not see, See what the world is truly today You only now what you are told You never want to believe the fact that the world is coming Coming to an end You look in never looking out You kill each other day after day When will this massacre end? When will you see it is for nothing? The truth is you never stop Only continue this unnecessary war Why? Is it for power? God cry’s down on you day after day But it is not enough to wash away the darkness. You make the sky dark Can you cleanse it away and make it light again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Evan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Evan. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your write...this so true. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/25/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congrats Evan on your 2nd place win in the Crisis contest with this excellent entry luv. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:41:00 AM
A powerful poem packed with questions and strong emotions, Evan. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:00:00 AM
Thank You Very Much
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:57:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:48:00 AM
Indeed the world is in crisis....so well described in this terribly true to life poem. Well done...congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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