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Questioning thy core, I see just a simple picture squared a photograph of thee. Shyness seems to shine in tilt of head and hair veiled eyes a snap shot of thee. Yet, I can sense a humor too a tone of voice in text askew the illusion of thee. How unkind it is you know, to make me guess I do not know, show yourself to me. Or I will bring a brave retort and make you guess just for sport what you’ve sensed of me. Date: 10/17/13 Poet: Desiree DuCouer

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Date: 11/24/2013 3:40:00 PM
She thinks I'm a fool... Added my request on her blog.. I guess she does not know who she is playing with. Why couldn't she has just done it like a lady, and give me the stupid NA I ask for... instead she lashes on a blog...LOL... I don't know, I never complained about an HM... But, come on, who is she kidding, she could have given my poem at least a 10.. Then again, she left out all the real native poems.. humm... Her approaching the subject last night was fishy. DG., I only talk when I need to
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Date: 11/24/2013 3:35:00 PM
You know me DG... i only come out when something it not right... And please do not congratulate me on her whacked out HM... I knew something was not right when she approached me twice last night about her contest, with my INDIAN INK poem. .. NO NO, I will not be insulted like that. I kind of had this feeling last night when she sent soup mail asking for advice on her contest.
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:28:00 PM
Congrats.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:41:00 AM
congratulations on your win debbie xx
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Date: 10/31/2013 6:17:00 PM
Way to go ..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:28:00 PM
very nicely penned debbie...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 3:01:00 PM
Nice win Debbie..congratulations
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Debbie ;) :) It's an awesome poem of yours. Good day :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:08:00 PM
awesome win DG... goodnight...PD
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:03:00 PM
The last line of this wonderful poem had me thinking how often we lock eyes with strangers in passing and think back on that single moment in time. Oh how souls can touch when they are willing . Lovely moment with your poem Debbie. Thanks; michael.
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Date: 10/29/2013 2:44:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Dan Kearley contest - Nice to read your words about a common friend, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:37:00 PM
You are so clever to use a pen name....often when a contest comes along requesting our names....I can't help to want to write under a pen name.....just for the sake of fairness. Love the name you chose!!
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Date: 10/20/2013 2:48:00 PM
longing Debbie is what I feel when reading this super pen well done Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:01:00 AM
Someone is fortunate to have you post her poem......perhaps does not have an account..?...it is kind of you to show her talent! This intrigues curiosity !!
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:40:00 AM
Well, I am confused did you write this one or did Desiree DuCouer write this work?..I really enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the invitation to write a poem for your contest..I will look again at Ghazal and see..I think I might have strep throat..I am not feeling well and have a sore throat..I got wet getting groceries yesterday but I was already about sick either with allergy or a cold..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:39:00 PM
Hey Love, I'm not myself... think the no sleep thingie has finally caught up... soupie on the way.
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