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Daniel

It's hard really; To describe you in one word, But if I had to, you'd be my Best friend. Maybe that counts as two words; So I'll try again, You are my Everything. But that still doesn't give you justice, you're always there for me when I need you You forgave me when I was horrible to you, And I owe you everything, Yet I can't tell you My simple feelings. Your laugh, voice, are like a melody of angel harks, Your eyes are like smooth chocolate and honey. You have a smile that lights my darkened soul; And if only there was a song I could send your way, But the best song is the one from my heart, However, that song is continually writing As long as you are in my life, it will alwayas be writing, Because you are; my light, my gardian angel my everything. my life my hope my peace my strength...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 11:36:00 AM
This is wonderful too...wow you're surrounded by so many nice people...it's really great. Fantastic poem!!..:)
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:46:00 PM
I'm gonna send this to Daniel! Just playing with yahhhh! Don't get pissed at me please! - David :)
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Date: 2/4/2012 8:45:00 PM
Spectacular--as usual. Hehehe. I know Danny boy. Yay! Hahah I won't tell him you wrote it....or...will I ... >:) I wonder what he'd think if he read it. Always, Laura
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Rebecca Larkin
Date: 2/4/2012 10:03:00 PM
haha... I kno you do... I don't think it would make a whole lot of difference though :/
Date: 1/31/2012 8:55:00 PM
Well written poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/31/2012 5:50:00 PM
Aren't these kind of people amazing ? :) loved this thank you for sharing.
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