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Dandilion Girl

We both have our eyes on a rising dandelion sprouted in high grass This gentle girl on her own looking past weeds to her future and I looking back _____________________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2012 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Carrie! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the win of your poem in Linda-Marie's "Life And Death...And Beyond" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:25:00 PM
best cheers to you for the high placement, carrie.... a lyrical piece with depth and substance..:) huggs
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Date: 1/18/2012 4:33:00 PM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON SWEET SUCCESS WITH THIS INTENSE WRITE ABOUT THE GREAT BEYOND...
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Date: 1/16/2012 10:24:00 AM
a sleeping child has been awakened that really touched me thank you
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Date: 1/14/2012 8:54:00 AM
You make the door for the after like a joy to enter with this fine poem Carrie. Good luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend, and thank you for your congrats on "Inlets & Islands" :)
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:36:00 AM
Wow, such imagery, and scary too. enjoyed. good luck in contest. harry
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:34:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive of the that time that will come to us all..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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