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Dandelion Dream

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Dandelion Dream

-Dandelion Dream-

I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 
They fade with one gush from the wind
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
Holding on tight to jagged leaves 
Sprinkles of sand fall over my needs
I stand close with a fistful of flowers
My tiny bouquet made of dandelion dreams 


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  1. Date: 2/16/2015 9:30:00 AM
    This piece is so beautiful in terms of imagery, flow, and depth of meaning. This is my kind of poetry that I enjoy reading and I hope to write like that one day! All the best, my dear poet! Pandita

  1. Date: 6/19/2014 2:35:00 AM
    nicely done SKAT ((( happy summer )))

  1. Date: 6/13/2014 6:08:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery; I love the dandelion--except when it overtakes my lawn. Thanks for your recent visit to my poem "Books."

  1. Date: 6/12/2014 11:31:00 AM
    Many dreams vanish into thin air...with one puff of wind; but others survive and flourish! Lovely write where imagery is a reality. // paul

  1. Date: 5/11/2014 10:21:00 PM
    A short write but so powerful. A mark of a finer sense of expression. Bravo and especially loved the line "Holding on tight to jagged leaves"

  1. Date: 5/10/2014 2:19:00 AM
    My newest poetry soup "FRIEND", this write is simply beautiful...a fistful of flowers....still going on in my head! Lovely :)

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 9:16:00 PM
    SKAT What a descriptive, imaginative and creative write. Full of feeling and so dreamlike. Thank you for the nice comment on my Colors poem.

  1. Date: 4/8/2014 1:32:00 AM
    Hi SKAT. I like this poem; the theme, the imagery. Nicely done. Thanks for your words, ;) Mel

  1. Date: 4/7/2014 6:21:00 PM
    Aw that is awesome. I loved reading this poem it was very real and description. I look forward to reading more of your words ;)

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 8:06:00 PM
    Beautiful. You know it's good poetry when you feel better inside, almost as if you had written it yourself. I felt that gush of wind.. Do write on dear poet. ~Teresa

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 10:06:00 PM
    Humble subject, great theme! A transformation is possible only with a skillful poet. SKAT you are that. My grandson makes dandelion bouquet during the summer for his "MOM", my daughter. Thanks SKAT for dreaming dandelion!

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 10:34:00 AM
    I love the way you described those dreams as dandelions blown with the wind..Very beautifully described..Dreams go and others come..just like Spring flowers..Lovely.

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 11:24:00 AM
    Hi Skat, I think this poem has such expression and imagination...Thank you, for sharing...You have quite a gift and a way of sharing how you feel on the inside...I just want to thank you, for being the first to welcome me when I started here on Poetry Soup...It was an encouragement to me, Skat :~) A friend, Cinda

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:27:00 AM
    I really enjoyed, "Dandelion Dreams".

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 2:14:00 PM
    Such beautiful imagery you create with words. Just marvelous! Thanks also for commenting on my poem #LegacyOfErrors

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:50:00 AM
    enjoyed very much I hope they grow into many sweet dreams

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 4:00:00 PM
    Lovely comparison of the fragility of dreams to that of a dandelion in the wind.

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 9:31:00 AM
    Dandelions just became a favourite flower. Lovely dreams you have. Those leaves taste beautiful too. Enjoyed my visit . Thanks I will call again.

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 3:54:00 PM
    Im not too familiar with this style but i like what you wrote here.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 4:28:00 PM
    Triolet is a beautiful form. So simple yet so complex. Makes me smile. Well done :)