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Dancing Raindrops

dancing raindrops on a full bloomed rose... deadly kiss withered petals on green wet grass... red carpet welcome

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2012 9:06:00 PM

soupmail

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2012 6:34:00 AM

That works really well, you've captured an apt sadness with your choice of word.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2012 10:21:00 PM

ooooh, I liked how the grass became a red carpet. WELL done, Kash.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/24/2011 1:18:00 AM

Loved this!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/18/2011 8:24:00 AM

Stunning imagery Kash ;) Wilma

Christopher Bunton

Date: 12/17/2011 7:42:00 PM

I like this!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/17/2011 7:11:00 PM

What a wonderful write Kash! I love the bloom of a fresh flower with the "dancing raindrops" on top! Beautiful!! Though my favorite line has to be, "deadly kiss" this is a fact of a rose! Stupendous Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2011 4:33:00 PM

kash.....I like it ! OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 12/17/2011 3:42:00 PM

this is an amazing imagery...its just wonderful. i just love the way its put together. A simple yet important message in such a lovely write...love Maryam*

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/17/2011 2:57:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Kash. No matter how alluring a rose may be, one must not forget it has thorns. : ) Love, Annalise

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/17/2011 2:34:00 PM

Nice visuals, Kash. I especially like the dancing raindrops. Kim