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Dancing On Nails

Anger streams from her pores, Like sweat on a July day. Her mood swings from frustration, to love, to sadness. As a family splinters before her eyes. I stand impotent, in many ways. Fear grips my throat like a vise squeezing my emotions, from eyes unable to cry. I absorb. The pain consumes my heart. Nothing works the way it should. The future stands as an unpaved road, littered with glass and nails. There are no shoes for me, only a body not working, and my exhausted mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/9/2009 3:42:00 PM
Hi Will, A very real hearted outstanding poetic write. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks for sharing, we're all amonst friends here. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/9/2009 12:26:00 PM
hey! nice poem...welcome to poetry soup... :P
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Date: 11/8/2009 6:42:00 PM
Very nice poem...Welcome to poetry soup...enjoyed...Marty
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