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Dancing In the Moonlight

Dancing in the moonlight Celestial lights flicker in heavens expanse Harvest moon beckons us to the dance, it's mango luminosity caresses ebon sky Pat Metheny plays in a smooth undertone involuntarily we begin swaying to the music my arms wrapped around you tight ohh feels soo good all our cares drift away, floating into oblivion, as our eyes fixate, glances morph into gazes Stars align in our hearts, and we know that everything will be all right, dancing with you... in the moonlight. John Derek Hamilton October 6,2016

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Brian Davey

Date: 11/1/2017 2:48:00 PM

Sounds like an amazing evening my friend, Congress on your win

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2017 6:12:00 PM

Thanks Brian, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the visit and comment!

Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/1/2017 8:51:00 AM

So very beautiful I read it twice. Congratulations!

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2017 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Frances, it is a very personal poem, based on a special night, glad you enjoyed it!

Lu Loo

Date: 11/1/2017 7:10:00 AM

beautifully romantic and passionate, thank you and congrats dear John :)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thanks Laura I am pleased you liked it, it is one of my favourites!

Phil Capitano

Date: 10/19/2016 5:26:00 PM

Love 'dancing in the moonlight' and Pat Metheny; smooth jazz and romantic poetry are my two favourite things.

John Hamilton
Date: 10/19/2016 9:41:00 PM

Thanks Phil I appreciate your visit and comments.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/14/2016 12:47:00 AM

Great way to enjoy life with your wife:) may God bless you both:)

John Hamilton
Date: 10/14/2016 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Jo

Fay Slimm

Date: 10/9/2016 4:22:00 PM

Some expressive phrasing used in this so so romantic verse Derek - dancing under the moon becomes unforgettable with love in your arms. An engaging read.

John Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Fay,John