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as tambourines pulse... stallions rock with gypsies' whirl firing dance of hooves 12/27/ 2016 John lawless Contest The TROIKA- (Haiku with hooves)

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/14/2017 10:29:00 PM

So full of pizzazz. Congratulations, Nette.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2017 6:36:00 PM

A lively scene! Congrats, Nette!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/14/2017 3:11:00 PM

congrats on your win, nette

John Lawless

Date: 1/14/2017 1:31:00 PM

Nette, this called up the visual in my mind before I ever saw the accompanying picture. thanks for entering the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2017 10:37:00 AM

very cool image, Nette. I hope your new year has started with fireworks!! Mine hasn't. WE are snowed in. They cancelled my school today so I am kind of glad but at the same time, I really needed that money!!!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/29/2016 8:28:00 AM

Great imagery, Nette:)

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/26/2016 10:26:00 PM

The. Real. Thing. : )

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/26/2016 9:50:00 PM

Great imagery... Very well done haiku... Good luck with the contest.... A 7...

Franco Gonza

Date: 12/26/2016 4:35:00 PM

I like the energy of this magical poem.... a carousel of a night!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2016 1:54:00 PM

- Lovely gypsies' dance, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/26/2016 1:49:00 PM

This was amazing Nette, but the poetry I find on your pages usually is. Really nice my friend.