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Dancing At the Precipice

Ignoring our fate we dance at the precipice as the oceans rise.

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Date: 1/1/2010 7:56:00 AM

So much truth in your words. Interesting perspective. Keep on writing! HAPPY NEW YEAR! Karen

Constance La France

Date: 12/28/2009 6:11:00 PM

great visual with your few words,and thanks for your comment on my poem, How about tea, asked Mr. Dinsdale.. here is another tidbit from the book.. Mr Herriot at the farm for injections.. cush,cush, said Mr. Kay and me, cush cush, slapping hands on legs, the heifers stopped pulling the grass and regarded us with little interest, their jaws moving lazily, then they turned suddenly and made a dash down the hill, thundering past, tails high, kicking like mustangs, as we danced about

P Sheart

Date: 12/27/2009 5:41:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Sue! I have to sit and ponder on this a little bit, smile. Yes, well I can go many places with this!! Very thought provoking. Love it. Love Light Patty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2009 12:37:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku. We are dancing at many precipices that we don't know exist. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara