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Dancing At a Temple

I am dancing Twirling and whirling Hands and face open to the sun Lost in the infinite You Draped in gauze and silks Whirling and twirling To the sounds of chants and drums As the deep tones of the monks Melt into the tender tones of nuns I am dancing, dancing Yes, yes I sit here stiff and graying But bathed in this golden light In my heart I am limber and strong For my spirit dances round and round As I fold into this universal song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/12/2010 11:54:00 PM
linda, this one is amazing. a big FAV!!! so glad I found it!
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Linda. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:37:00 AM
LINDA, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:30:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! LINDA, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/13/2010 1:21:00 PM
hello & Congratulations Linda! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Linda what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2010 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all luv..
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:37:00 PM
and a glorious dancer you are as you portray yourself. lovely write. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:29:00 PM
Lovely !
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:50:00 PM
Linda~ Its sound like your in-love I really like the feeling your poem ignites. Laura :)
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