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Dancing Floor

Sweet vibes coming from the speakers As her skirt and blouse shine like gold, Making my hairs stand like whiskers, As I look at her ,inner feelings unfold, I pull her to the dancing floor, As her fragrance energizes me, Aroma of pure wine is the cure, Beacons of light make my soul free, As I dance closely with my dame, Boredom and shyness are put to shame. Olusegun Arowolo Date:9-17-2015 CONTEST:Mixed senses sponsored by Nette Onclaud *Music*

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Date: 12/1/2015 2:33:00 PM
A heady mixture of all the senses... splendidly conceived with fine rhyming and smooth cadence. Well done! Keith
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Date: 12/1/2015 2:34:00 PM
...congrats on your win!
Date: 10/8/2015 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful imagery olusegun! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 10/3/2015 3:59:00 PM
olu, you made my senses sway...enticing work quite sensual.. big congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:57:00 PM
Olusegun, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!! Wonderful write.
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:53:00 PM
This lovely imagery blends to form a romantic mood, Olusegun. The senses are captivated! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:36:00 PM
very nice, Olusegun. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/2/2015 3:42:00 PM
beautiful imagery Olusegun congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2015 11:47:00 AM
Very nice for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, under green leaves ...
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