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Staring upon
my soul
I see within
A reflection
of something beautiful
Of who,
I truly am

My eyes glisten
in sadness
crystal droplets
Falling softly
tumbling down
Two ashen
pale cheeks

I watch
without amusement
suffering a loss
in a sad composure
What have I done,
to be
so unblessed
To warrant you’re run?

Written in collaboration: Liam & Mystic

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Hey Liam, Wonderfully inked my friend..Cool collaboration.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 1:17:00 PM
    I couldn't have done it without you darling, thank you xxx

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 10:11:00 AM
    This is very deep ..I enjoyed reading such sad yet beautiful collab by you liam and our sweet Mystic Rose