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The room smells, wall paper peeled, reveals children's scribbles— small smiles, suns, pink trees Windows high with curious robins on sills wind moans through cracks sun dances branches on the walls A man pounces the piano with gusto five, six, seven, eight! I ply and jump, forget about him But in the background, invisible, one terrifying presence pairs with old grandeur j'ai peur Late that night my violin sang its song near perfection— sharp, shrill *** July 22, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 7/24/2017 9:16:00 AM
So gorgeous
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Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Tim :)
Date: 7/24/2017 5:55:00 AM
the poem is very scary - and it takes the imagination to many places
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Darren White
Date: 7/24/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thanks Verlecia, not too bad I hope?
Date: 7/23/2017 8:28:00 AM
That does sound like a fright, Darren. Very descriptive. Well done :)
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Darren White
Date: 7/23/2017 10:30:00 AM
It is indeed Heidi, thank you :)
Date: 7/23/2017 7:26:00 AM
I enjoyed you very vivid account. I would be scared too!
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Darren White
Date: 7/23/2017 8:17:00 AM
yeah... and it was indeed.
Date: 7/23/2017 7:08:00 AM
A quiet scream. Brilliantly penned mon petit Piroet. Gorgeously penned. fave & hugs xomo
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Darren White
Date: 7/23/2017 8:16:00 AM
Merci my dear friend :)
Date: 7/23/2017 6:57:00 AM
Very cool Darren, spirits inhabit the world of music and sometimes at night I hear music in the distance when all the world is quiet.
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Darren White
Date: 7/23/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Phil. It's wonderful you can hear that :)

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