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Dance Party In Summer

dance party of summer blue waves rock and roll seashore tides shimmy and shake ~ sunlight tap dances white clouds pirouette delphiniums deep plies ~ ebb tides grand jettes meadows slowly waltz forests polka with raindrops ~ breezes minuet willow trees tango sunflowers skip jump and jive ~ moon does the hustle butterflies slow dance ladybugs groove in two-step ~ surfside twists and shouts shooting stars moon walk tide pools salsa dancing ~ birch trees swing and sway dandelions stroll fields of daisies jitterbug ~ long days zydeco swift rivers rumba rapids mambo in quickstep ~ starshine at the hop

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/2/2021 8:28:00 PM

Very creative haiku sequence! Fantastic imagery, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2021 10:57:00 AM

Hi Kim! Sincere gratitude for your visit and wonderful, encouraging message! Thank you! This was as fun as a summer dancy party on the beach to create. Brought back many summer memories! Blessings to you!

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/1/2021 6:48:00 PM

What a brilliant set of haikus!! Your pen is boundless dear Sam…This is a fave for me..Congratulations!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/1/2021 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Sam. I am mesmerized with your string of haikus. each one is brilliant. To my faves, Dear Friend. Love ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2021 10:53:00 AM

Mala, dear friend, thank you for your lovely message and your fav! That is an honor in itself! Have always loved to dance and once I got started I didn't want to leave the dance floor! Much love and many hugs to you!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2021 12:54:00 AM

An amazing string of haiku Sam, i struggle to write one decent one, I love the dandelion one especially ! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/30/2021 9:36:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku chain. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/1/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris! Once I got rolling I couldn't the haiku just kept coming!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/30/2021 5:29:00 PM

A superbly crafted bevy of haiku. Dance party and a very fine natural scene my friend. All are great but this one was to me special- ""swift rivers rumba rapids mambo in quickstep ~ starshine at the hop"" A splendid fav.. God bless..

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/30/2021 4:27:00 AM

Each haiku superb. Splendid write!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2021 10:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Rama! This was such fun to create. Sending you hugs and blessings and a new pair of dancing shoes just for good measure!

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/29/2021 8:04:00 PM

what a brilliant string of haikus, love the recital of summer dances you present, great imagery! bravo... hugs and blessings

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2021 10:50:00 AM

Hi Sandra! Thank you! Of all of the seasons Summer really does a joyful dance of life for me - like Snoopy doing his happy dance. So glad you enjoyed this haiku string! Sending you blessings of happy feet and a full dance card my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2021 7:46:00 PM

My dearest Rhyme Time friend, I adore your whimsical strand of summer hiaku. Your summer-fun imagery is full of easy-breezy vibrancy and dance moves. Your imagination cha-cha'd with my imagination and left me breathless in wonderment at your fanciful pen! I especially loved; "shooting stars moon walk" - how ingenious, Sam! Your golden pen shines ever so brightly in this sprightly work of art. A fav! Warmest wishes in dancing shoes doing the bump for you.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2021 10:46:00 AM

Dearest Rhyme Time friend, your message truly touched, honored, my heart. Your work has been an inspiration - a level of excellence I aspire to - and your supportive feedback has given my pen wings of affirmation! Treasure. It is truly an honor to have this poem in your favs! Time to put on our dancing shoes, fill our dance card and dance into the morning! Sending you rock and roll blessings of happy feet!