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Dance of the Spirit

DANCE OF THE SPIRIT They sing, you dance Like a naked child sputtering in the rain Your feet are wet Your body soaked with waters and sweat You can not control the birth Every step, a deeper flair Tell me daughter, where hence the beats come? Why is the drummer hidden from view? Whose voice is that song? Calling you to endless pursuit?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:38:00 AM

Pen P, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

Hi Pen Piper, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing - skat

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/29/2015 1:35:00 AM

Your noble write swims eloquent in the heart of the readers, it sized my attention through the whole read.. Excellent..........A.M.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/25/2015 7:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this beautiful powerful piece and I am happy I stumbled across it! Excellent work - well done! It's a 7!! Pandita