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Dance of the Sparrows

The Sparrows they dance They dance to a music Soaring in time to the conductors baton Flitting, diving they follow his movements The song they create is beyond words, beyond sound The Sparrows they dance They dance to a music The wind is their partner as they whirl with the breeze Together as one they swoop and soar Overhead a smiling sun looks down The Sparrows sing a wordless song Of the simple happiness they feel The Sparrows they dance They dance to a music This is my favourite poem because it describes the amazing beauty of somthing as simple as the formation and synchronized movement of a flock of sparrows.

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 4:14:00 PM
EMMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:50:00 AM
Emma, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Emma on a wonderful win with this awesome poem being your favorite one luv..
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Emma
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:02:00 PM
Well done Emma. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/20/2011 9:44:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Emma. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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