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Dance of the Snowflakes - a Waltz Wave

Dance snowflakes dance from your icy home above. Each twirl, each swirl, ballet perfect as you pirouette your way down to the frozen ground, where you take your last bow. 11/17/15

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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/21/2015 3:58:00 PM
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Fogot to mention I am fav'ing this beauty my friend! Hugs, Connie
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:32:00 PM
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Wow! I'm honored, Connie!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/21/2015 3:56:00 PM
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Wow Kim! This is a top winner for me. Comparing snowfall to ballet is brilliant! I loved it! I also loved the form you chose. It displayed your words superbly. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:30:00 PM
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Thank you for encouraging words, Connie!I'm so glad you liked it!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2015 4:05:00 AM
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That's a lovely concept, Kim. Congratulations.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:29:00 PM
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Thank you, Lin!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 3:47:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:29:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/21/2015 12:02:00 AM
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How lovely Kim.. congrats on awesome first place win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:28:00 PM
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Thank you, Upma!
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Skat A
Date: 11/20/2015 8:00:00 PM
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Kim, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 11/19/2015 2:23:00 PM
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Oh my, this is great..A winner for sure. BG
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:27:00 PM
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Thank you, Barbara! So glad you liked it!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 11/18/2015 12:46:00 PM
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Wow, very beautiful. i like a lot
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/24/2015 5:26:00 PM
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Thank you Njeri! I'm glad you liked it!
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Skat A
Date: 11/18/2015 12:31:00 PM
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awesome. SKAT
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:54:00 PM
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Thank you, SKAT!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/18/2015 8:15:00 AM
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Next dance, please? Thank you! Phantasmagoric, dear Kim. A seven!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:53:00 PM
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I appreciate your encouraging comments, Demetrios! Thank you!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/17/2015 4:54:00 PM
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i love the whole dance analogy, kim! you've done a fine job with this one...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:52:00 PM
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Thank you, Ilene! I'm glad you liked it.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2015 4:28:00 PM
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This is so charming.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:51:00 PM
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Thank you, Lin!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2015 3:29:00 PM
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Delightful Kim - I am so glad you introduced this form to us:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Jan!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 11/17/2015 3:05:00 PM
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and each as unique as your pen Kim! Delicate and beautiful, best of luck....:), jill
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:49:00 PM
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Thank you for your sweet comment, Jill!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 2:55:00 PM
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- Beautiful, Kim - (luckily we do not have snow yet) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:48:00 PM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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