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Dance of the Flowers

As the sun sets on a lovely evening, A field of flowers are elegantly dancing. All aline perfectly so, Swaying to and fro, While the winds move the trees ever so slow, Their petals hold such a graceful flow, Dancing with the wind as it blows. Even though..... This beautiful showing will soon end. While the sun is sinking lower to its rest, But for now.... they take one more joyous bow, As their dance is finally done they are perfectly at rest, For they now they did their best.

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Date: 7/16/2016 9:16:00 AM
This is a perfect allegory for life. Great work Ettie. --Alex Roth
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Date: 4/6/2016 3:56:00 PM
Absolutely delightful imagery Ettie - amazing how we both have the flowers dancing - great minds think alike:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 4/6/2016 5:23:00 PM
Wow yes I just noticed that my self!! Much agreed! Thank you for the feedback!-Love Ettie
Date: 9/15/2015 10:41:00 PM
These splendid little dancers earned their pride, and merit the moonlit kiss of deep blue sky. I really love how the wind is the natural partner for the energetic flowers. "Dancing with the wind as it blows..." I feel as though my mind danced with your heart in this poem Ettie...J.A.B.
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 9/16/2015 7:56:00 PM
Im so glad you liked my poem I really enjoyed writing this poem ....Thank you for your kind words Justin-Love Ettie
Date: 7/2/2014 4:58:00 PM
This one has such powerful, profound meaning. This is a very much a vibrant, glorious poem. :]
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/3/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thank you (takes a bow)-Love Ettie
Date: 7/2/2014 4:55:00 PM
No comments? You deserve lots of praise for your poems...ok reading shtill... :) can't stop reading your verses haha. Beautifully written and majestic. Blissful imagery about flowers. Flowers are amazing plants. - :p DWB
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/3/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thank you sooo much!!!-Love Ettie

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