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Dance of the Demons (The Haunting Continues)

We start our dance Which we'll dance with great delight This night my Demon can free me of this Fright My chest be free from this Blight His night has come, The deed shall be done, With knife in hand And partner left under my command Fear starts to flicker across his face As we kneel to do our disgrace He smiles as I draw the knife Why does this not seem right? His eyes hold no fright Can't he see this is not right My body is not it's own I am locked inside as a drone. The demon commands us to slaughter So our knives slice through like water. Neither of us cares not a bit As blood from our prey doth spit His smile falls as I draw the knife As he sees that I'm no longer his wife Strife and discord this fool has caused But is his life the price, so I paused We revel and rejoice with blood spill We REALLY do so enjoy the thrill All I want to do is scream As this must be a dream No not at all a dream But 'tis the Demons scheme. Illyanna set this Demon on the go Time to set upon Robert Celentano Thanks Illyanna and Martyn love for your help as i could not have done this without you ,,,thanks John LovingIII for making me be challenged...hope I do THe Haunted Poets Society proud

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Date: 7/25/2009 5:17:00 PM
Also a good narration, should be enought blood spilled fo a haunting, Moses
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Date: 7/25/2009 11:13:00 AM
Excellent poem Kristy, super read>>James
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Date: 7/25/2009 8:02:00 AM
This is a very spooky "Dance of the Demons," Kristy, and well in keeping with the theme of Johnos' "Haunted Poets Society." I'm sure Robert will make us proud, too! Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:29:00 AM
Way to go! The drama, suspense, makes this haunting more intense.-AA
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:53:00 PM
deliciously horrific! Kristy! you are a true member of the Haunted Poets Society! SCARE ON ROBERT!!!!
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Date: 7/24/2009 5:57:00 PM
I knew you could do it! I am very glad a chose you! LOVE ILLY
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Date: 7/24/2009 5:32:00 PM
Wow, this litle contest is a winner..youve done yourself proud. Im going to see Demons tonight. BG
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Date: 7/24/2009 5:06:00 PM
soup mail
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Date: 7/24/2009 4:48:00 PM
Proud? you win the prize for most realistic. you have a lot of guys shaking in their boots. afraid to go to sleep tonight.and yet the demon is the realest of them all. this was truly a "Spooky Tale". John Henry Loving III. p.s. by the way; you need a psyciatrist.
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Date: 7/24/2009 4:06:00 PM
Yeah, see you did it. I am so proud of you. See you are twisted, lol. Loved it
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