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Dance of the Crows

The dance of the crows Deadly birds of paradise They fly into the air And dance around in circles Going around and around Flying to its peak Fluttering its wings This dance of the crows Takes over the birds The end of life The black death they are A completion of the end Absence of hope A terrible demise I don’t want to observe The dance of the crows
Russell Sivey Entrant into Nette Onclaud's "~ LET'S DANCE! ~" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2012 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2012 5:15:00 PM
gosh, how the heck did I miss THIS one. It's really great, Russell. Congratulations on your BIG WIN. and well deserved.
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Date: 3/17/2012 4:29:00 PM
congrats on your contest win with this unique approach to the theme, you went darker like I did :-)
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Date: 3/17/2012 2:38:00 PM
what a brooding kind of a dance, russell... you pierced me!.. congrast on your win in my contest..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/17/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2012 12:20:00 PM
congrats Russell on another well deserved win for a wonderful write of grand imagery and detail my friend... luv..
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:10:00 PM
Wow, I just love this one, Russell. What an awesome imaginative piece
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:23:00 PM
wow very imaginative Russell.. a view from the sky so to speak of these crows.. awesome birds they are.. lu last three lines most for emphatic energy of the piece ..good luck in contest.. happy weekend luv..
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Date: 3/9/2012 10:56:00 AM
You think crows are bad try raven's LOL one suggestion the [its] say what they refer to don't use the [it]..BIG hugs! Light & Love
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:32:00 AM
Interesting and creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Reads like a winner in Nette's contest..I have never seen the crows dance that would be interesting..Good luck in the contest..Your encouraging comments were uplifting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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