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Dance of the Butterfly

Sometimes insects are yucky Scary looking and beastly That make you jump out of your skin But one holds beauty from within This furry ling legged creature soon Will hide inside a warm cocoon Transforming into colored wings And all the beauty that it brings Will immerse from deep inside Where it was kept mummified Now this graceful gorgeous sight spreads its wings as it takes flight Into its new home in the sky Exotic and free it will fly Like a colored perfect painting A masterpiece it is creating Putting on a dainty show As rhythm begins to flow From this poised and nimble newborn Dancing to a new life song As the butterfly flutters by Above our heads and way up high '

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/8/2014 8:36:00 PM
Robin, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:07:00 AM
Wow Robin ,, i cud really imagine it dance to ur tunes ! congrats on win !
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Date: 6/3/2014 9:29:00 PM
I liked the idea of this innocent newborn who captures our attention before it flies away.... Your poem was very nicely rhymed, Robin! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/28/2014 9:43:00 PM
hey,I just noticed. YOu have not put up a new post in a while. Hurry, there are so many contests right now. let's see a three line poem from you, Robin~
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:45:00 PM
I love how you describe the butterfly's life in such a magical and beautiful way and written with great flow too...nicely done Robin :) Ana
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Date: 5/28/2014 1:46:00 PM
Very nice poem Robin...just keep the bees away from me...Noelle
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:14:00 PM
beauty in every line.....SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2014 4:19:00 PM
Dear Robin, what a beautifully-penned poem! Like you, I am prone to avoid most insects, but butterflies, caterpillars, ladybugs and dragonflies are the exception. Really like the way you took us through the entire life cycle of beauty being born in the butterfly! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2014 3:53:00 PM
So cute, Robin. WELL DONE!! Love that nimble newborn line.
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Date: 5/21/2014 1:45:00 PM
Robin, a perfect 7..... love it..PD
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:19:00 AM
Hi Robin, This is such a great great write!! I loved the story and I loved the meaning. Well said my friend. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:12:00 AM
a great metaphor for life in general
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