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Dance of Death

The dragon dance of death, Born in silent Wuhan Round and round far it goes, Filling ballrooms of Rome Hip Hop, Tap, Rock and Roll Taking breaths of poor souls Healthy youth fit to dance, Saving our elder lives. Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE M,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/21/2020 10:28:00 AM

This is such a graceful piece I've ever read about the little monster till now! What an idea to connect it to the dance forms !! Rock and roll, Jenish! You have rocked the floor!!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/21/2020 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Swetha..Such a delightful comment for my humble thought.. Stay safe...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2020 9:37:00 AM

Such eloquence you portrayed in dance of death, Jenish--charming imagery my friend, even in a dark theme--splendid!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/21/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Vijay for that delightful comment.. Takecare always..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/20/2020 9:02:00 PM

Hip, hop, tap, rock and roll... Very crafty, Mr. Craftsman! Devastating dancer, that virus! Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/21/2020 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Gershon.. Craftsman of death dancing around..Beware..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/20/2020 7:22:00 PM

Breathing fire as the dragon dances everywhere causing death to the old and vulnerable in the most unlikely places while the music plays on ... Wow

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/21/2020 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Shirley..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/20/2020 12:19:00 AM

The harsh reality of this world today that has brought people together as they fight against it. This is thought provoking Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/21/2020 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Aditi...