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Dancer's toes pointed to impress the music floats into the night as she dances the white swan's flight Poised to extreme of gracefulness Ethereal vision of desire A transfiguration on fire Arms arched as a lovers caress She loses her passionate hate of life's unhealthy lonely state She dances like someone possessed Ridding her soul of painful thoughts Cleansing her memories too nought Lost in this wonder, free of stress A smile alights her peaceful face a vision of beauty and grace Dancer's toes pointed to impress, Poised to extreme of gracefulness. Arms arched as a lovers caress She dances like someone possessed Lost in this wonder, free of stress. Penned 20 December 2013

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Date: 2/12/2014 3:19:00 PM
Lovely images and silky flow in this, your wonderful poem. I so enjoyed reading it and know that you were in touch with that place where all powerful verse resides. Congratulations on your win.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/13/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thank you so much ...Seren
Date: 2/9/2014 7:42:00 PM
your constanza is so lovely, Seren. Love this one. Congrats, and how are you??
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/13/2014 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, didnt really know what I was doing. But the words seemed to come easily...Seren
Date: 12/23/2013 10:10:00 PM
I have always said, quality over quantity, and this is surely one of the best poems I have read! Well done!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/23/2013 11:18:00 PM
thank you...Seren
Date: 12/22/2013 8:24:00 AM
A time to dance, as my heart does when hearing your wonderful poetic music! Beautiful!! Merry Christmas, Seren, chuck
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2013 2:55:00 AM
Hello Chuck, thank you so much for your kind comment ....Seren
Date: 12/21/2013 1:27:00 AM
You've written an excellent write here my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening, Seren! What a lovely poem, such a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2013 2:57:00 AM
Hi Russell. Thanks for your kind words ......Seren
Date: 12/20/2013 6:41:00 AM
Beautiful write on dance with this beauty of a constanza, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2013 2:56:00 AM
Hello Ram thank you ..... Seren

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