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Dance At the Fireplace

Leading you next to the fireplace.. Can I take your hand? Leading you there somewhere Won't you close your eyes awhile? Don't get afraid or scared I will do no pain or harm Now, I will place both arms Both arms to your narrow waist Moving slightly one to the nape Moving slowly one just lower Won't you lean your head? Lean to the hallow of my throat As I will too Butterflies will suddenly fly sudden shivers will run down the spine A song from the heart will be playing My head I'll gently move Searching soft cheeks to purr Lingering my nose to fill Smelling scents of you I'll land a kiss to your forehead And face to face, can I? Closing my eyes beneath your gaze One step at a time Matching mine to yours And yours to mine our feet duet unto the floor Owning this solitary moment This solely moment for awhile By: olive_eloi 7:41 pm 02/10/2014 ---------------

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Date: 11/24/2014 1:09:00 PM
Dance at the fireplace, or a beach bonfire on the sands. If it happens to be with you, I'll feel a hundred grand. Dreamy romantic poetry Olive, James......
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2014 3:33:00 PM
:D! thanks.. :D
Date: 2/12/2014 8:23:00 PM
Olive, Wonderful romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it as much as you enjoyed writing it. Allan
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/13/2014 4:04:00 AM
hahaha.. thanks allan.. :) i really like it too.. . hahaha. I wish someday one will dance with me near a fireplace.. :) doesn't matter if he is my sister, dad or mother... or he my man :D God bless us all.. :)
Date: 2/12/2014 4:30:00 PM
So beautiful as always and very romantic. I felt as if I was your dance partner as read your work. I would let you lead me to a fire place or anywhere and see those beautiful eyes and that wonderful glow as we would embrace into a slow dance
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/13/2014 4:05:00 AM
hahahah.. thankks michael.. wahh.. I can not post in my blog.. :(
Date: 2/12/2014 2:33:00 PM
Take the ribbon from her hair -shake it loose and let it fall. George Jones knew a good line line in country music. I think perhaps you too have found that same romantic essence with your line, "Searching soft cheeks to purr." Love that! Nicely done~!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/12/2014 3:02:00 PM
aha.. thank you for passing by and reading one of my compositions.. :D hahaha yes i like that line among the other lines.. :D and thanks for the correction.. :D purr.. GOD bless us.. :)

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