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Dance At Sundown

In the middle of a wide open golden field, with wild flower crops rippling in the breeze, stands a silent silhouette of a tree, bare without leaves. This majestic oak spreads its branches over the canvas of a red sunset, dancing wildly into the quiet night, before it falls fast asleep, under a star filled dark blue sky. 7/28/15 nature poems only contest

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Date: 8/26/2015 8:40:00 PM
Lovely image, Lee, nicely done. Viv x
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Date: 8/5/2015 5:06:00 PM
Oh Lee you strayed it should be quiet of night sorry I cold not place you for this is a lovely poem hugs 7
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Date: 7/31/2015 12:16:00 PM
Your descriptive is very brilliant, love it...........A.M.
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Date: 7/31/2015 9:39:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive Lee - hugs Jan xx soup mail
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:37:00 AM
Very descriptive work..I could just see the scene..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 7/31/2015 5:49:00 AM
lovely scene that makes me want to prance around,lee.. huggs
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:18:00 PM
Hi, Lee, I loved your poem, too, and thanks for liking my entry. I pray you do well in the contest. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:18:00 PM
A well-written poem.
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Date: 7/29/2015 11:11:00 AM
Lee, you have penned a beautiful scene with words, a perfectly majestic 7 and thanks for visiting my three grey cats poem , I love that one so much
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:04:00 PM
Lovely imagery in a short write, Lee. Best wishes in the contest. PS. L5- did you mean "its"? Possesive...also L8, maybe you meant "falls". Hope you don't mind. I care, you see. Might make a difference in the contest. Hugs!
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/28/2015 8:41:00 PM
Kim thank you! I didn't catch that! ??

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