Dance

Dance I must Or I will lose my lust for living my life like I was born to become. My DNA held the seed of rhythm, and my dancing feet must pound the floor to generate heat. Play it again Sam, get me off my seat! 24/07/2016 I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada- 2 - Poetry Contest DANCE N/A Etheree Contest Judged on 7/26/2016 8:39:00 PM.

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Jean Murray

Date: 8/4/2016 4:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Broken Wings, for my placement with this poem in your recent contest. I really like this one myself.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/29/2016 8:27:00 PM

Beautiful dance...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/30/2016 11:05:00 AM

you're very talented....

Jean Murray
Date: 7/30/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment Pashang.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/24/2016 2:35:00 PM

keep on dancing, jean (and writing about it as well!)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2016 6:37:00 PM

Have you seen my DANCING QUEEN Ilene??

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2016 1:23:00 PM

Lovely poem - I especially love the final line jean:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2016 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/24/2016 1:00:00 PM

You need some footstompin' music! You go girl!

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2016 6:36:00 PM

Just back, in fact Daniel. From a foot stomping night with Vieux Farka Toure, son of Malian guitar player Ali Farka Toure. To listen with my body to such amazing guitar playing. Wow! You bet I was moving my body to that African beat!!