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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lho8CdXADws

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cxGWGohIXiw

 

 

If I can make it off this chair, I’ll dance, my lovely Irish dance. Arms can stay down, how wonderful. Just two feet, so beautiful, In joint ecstasy and cadence. Whirling, moving, turbulent air. If I can make it to the stage, Reading aloud, speak my rhyme Myself, speak and make them sing. No pause, no awkward waiting. Each word a melody, this time, Creating beauty out of rage. If I could only lift my arms, I’d dance, not just my Irish whirling. I’d fly, be what I want to. But words will have to make do, And I am glad my words can sing. Words, forever lucky charms. For now my dance must come from you You be my arms, my feet, my mouth You whirl and turn, you jam You make my poems into slam You make my shyness into proud You dance, so I will too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/24/2017 9:51:00 PM
Your form is impeccable and very clever. Awesome!
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Date: 4/11/2017 2:37:00 AM
Hello Darren, all i can say is wow. from the language to the content, amazing. I aim to memorise this poem.
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Darren White
Date: 4/11/2017 2:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful compliment :)
Date: 3/20/2017 4:09:00 PM
I'd love to see that dance...Michael Flatley eat your heart out.
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Darren White
Date: 3/20/2017 4:12:00 PM
One of those videos I still need to embed is Michael Flatley. I adored that guy. I could dance like he did, even though I was a classical ballet dancer :D
Date: 3/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
I'm amazed you don't have lots of comments on this one. This is a hopeful write. I love dancing, sometimes we take simple pleasures for granted. If you can move a few fingers you can still dance. With your heart and mind you have danced across this page.
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Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 8:11:00 AM
Hah, thanks, I was thinking of editing and reposting this one, with proper YouTube links. I didn't have many people reading my poems in the beginning, I just had to get used to how it worked here :)

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