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Dance

Quatrain #23: DANCE Look to this day to seize your chance, Dare to greet stray of rays that dance; Live with each play with profound zest, Love knows the way when cheer seeds trance. ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 09 July 2015 Singapore

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Date: 7/9/2015 11:06:00 PM
Looks like you have written a lot of quatrains already. I won't attempt to critique yours as a quatrain per se, as I have not tried doing this yet. Form aside, the poem appeals to me as a good advice on life and love.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 7/11/2015 11:01:00 AM
Dear Josefina: Thank you for your comments. Leon

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