Dance

Dancing 'neath the moon Under the starry night sky Morning comes too soon

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Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 9:25:00 PM

The night under the starry sky dancing with our loved one always passes by far too fast. It always seems that love can steal time from us and we do not know where it went. But it is a beautiful thing. to be so lost in someone that you lose track of time. Beautiful as always!!!

Rachel W

Date: 4/13/2010 6:41:00 PM

Morning always comes too soon, ALWAYS. haha Great poem, Francine!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2010 7:26:00 AM

Oh nice one.!! I like the romantic feel of this little poem! Love, Carrie

Constance La France

Date: 4/13/2010 5:05:00 AM

This haiku is very pretty, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for your comment on My Forever Star.. love Constance