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Dampened Sheets

Ken Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll - Premium MemberPremium Member   Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Dampened Sheets

I am the sultry silence
the wishbone
of your dreams
feel my warm breath
slither down your throat
across your chest
feel my transparent tongue...

We rage the erotic battle
I feel your pulse race
my fingers of flame
caress all that is yours
I am your imagination
arching above your feminine form
I sink slowly into you...

Just so you know my love
you will never be able
to shake me from your dreams
I will seduce you to a place
beyond mere thoughts and words
tonight, dream of us...

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  1. Date: 1/25/2014 5:34:00 PM
    very passionate Ken hot stuff great write Shadow x smile hug

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 1/25/2014 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda for stopping by..
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:28:00 PM
    excellent piece penned beautiful my dear friend

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/1/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Liam, Thanks buddy.
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Sensuality at its best. Very passionate and hot! reminds me of a poem I wrote some time ago...Touched by Your Flame. Wonderful write....To my favorites.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, Thanks for your wonderful visit to my verse. Ken
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 12:06:00 PM
    poured of the page beautiful piece my dear friend

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Liam, Thanks mt friend for stopping by today.. Ken
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:29:00 AM
    sizzling with slow fire of passion and yet wonderfully restrained , ken... what a fine job this is..:) huggs

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HI Nette, Thank you for the wonderful visit.. Ken
    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, Thank you as well for the visit and kind commentary.. Ken
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:20:00 AM
    Ahh!!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 6:20:00 AM
    Hi, my dear friend Ken! I'm so glad that I came here to express my thanks for your lovely visit on my work & I was able to read this outstanding poem of yours. This is more than charming amorous poem you've penned my friend. Thank you so much for sharing & your precious time to visit my poem & the very nice comment you left. Thank you thank you so much. Have a great day! This comment was re encoded cuz the first one was accidentally deleted when I edited it! More blessings! love & hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:29:00 AM
    - Love can be read from the body and from your eyes. - Continue with beautiful dreams,Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one. Ken
    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 9/30/2013 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra, Thank you for the lovely comment. Ken
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 11:41:00 PM
    wow Ken...the metaphor in this poem is great...steamy, sultry, erotic all popped into my head while reading it...excellent write!