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Face to face Mirrors cracking between the irony As the glasses fall And my breath is lost My eyes turn red And my feet can not seem to find the ground My hands fighting to hold on My body has given up But my soul remains intact I just don't know about yours.

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Date: 2/6/2017 12:43:00 PM
Very good, i just like the last last line 'I just don't know about yours'
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Anthea Ghobede
Date: 2/7/2017 2:09:00 PM
The question marks were supposed to be a smiley face sorry
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Anthea Ghobede
Date: 2/7/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thankyou so much treasure??
Date: 1/31/2017 7:54:00 AM
Fulfilling metaphors ... Very nice write ...
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Anthea Ghobede
Date: 2/7/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thank you for your comments in my poetry...much appreciated

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