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Dallying

How your beauteous face stirs me as I gaze into your startling eyes deep blue pools of mystery I see you hold me bound by satin ties Your hair shines like ravens wings a riotous windswept mass of curls as I gaze up on you my heart sings seeming to turn in spins and whirls Your figure so perfectly curved I just yearn to be in your arms your piecing gaze has me unnerved and yet I am pulled by your charms Dallying together, passions rising soon we will be wed as man and wife for now we just play, do some musing of emotions which do now run so rife written for National Poetry Day 10/03/2013 I tried to leave which sex to the readers imagination

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2013 9:19:00 AM

Passsionate work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 4:44:00 PM

hi Sara Ty for your nice review Shadow x smile

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 10/6/2013 8:32:00 PM

Lovely work my dear Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:15:00 AM

Dearest M.M ty my friend appreciated love Shadow xox smile

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2013 7:25:00 PM

Ha ha, good for you. This was a very sexy piece.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:14:00 AM

hi Richard sorry for slow reply (had no internet) glad you liked it ty for reading Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 9:52:00 PM

Hmmm, you are teasing us. by saying "for now we just play" I can interpret that one of two ways!!! I like what Carrie said, Stirring the sex pot!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:13:00 AM

Hi Andrea I must have been too close to it lol I did not intend to tease but I see what you mean now. Ty for reading Shadow x smile

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/3/2013 2:01:00 PM

The perfect title.........dallying is to tease.....flirt and stir the sex pot !! Yes!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:11:00 AM

Lol Ty Carrie for your lovely review Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/3/2013 12:17:00 PM

Hi! my friend, just few minutes before I was thinking like it and am surprised that you have beautifully written the same. Miracle, it is. I think it's a kind of corruption of blackmailing love. Excellently done. I can,t do as you can. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:10:00 AM

Hi BL nice to see you Ty for your review life is strange lol Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2013 11:00:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Shadow !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 8:09:00 AM

Ty Anne Lise much appreciated Shadow x smile