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Daisy's Dream

Her eyes were kind of hazy; As daisy had a dream. She invited me into her mind; To see what she had seen. A fox in a suite; A giant mouse clown. Black pointy trees; Vibrating sound. A dream which to some; Seemed so frightening and dark. To her was like heaven; So her mind took a park. Black stained red lilies; Cats with fangs and a speaker box. Here no one wore shoes; They only wore socks. Leaves sprinkled with crystals; Gravity is then decreased. This realm that was free from worry; All was living and deceased. Understanding the end; Is what navigated her present being. Darkness and beauty colliding; Is what I saw Daisy dreaming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/17/2016 5:43:00 PM
TERRENCE, congratulations on your wonderful dreamin'' win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Terrence! Amazing pen!
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:03:00 PM
Terrence, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:17:00 PM
Hi Terrence, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:22:00 PM
TERRENCE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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