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Daisy Chains

We make daisies into a chain. Giggling, laughing, it starts to rain. We lift our faces to the sky and soon we're drenched, you and I. I close my eyes for a moment , brief. Opening them I'm consumed with grief. My heart is pounding in the dark night. Gone is my child, the meadow, the light. Only in dreams do you come to me. In morning light my tears run free. I long for sleep to see you again. Only my dreams bring relief from pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2012 3:24:00 AM
me c all of the ...poetry... sounds a bit sad, some of my grandchildren don't want to know me....drat hey their loss...
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:00:00 PM
BTW .. MEANT TO TELL U I COULD NOT ACCESS YOUR 4 POEMS ABOVE THIS ONE TO READ AND COMMENT ON AS ONLY A BLANK SCREEN APPEARS WHEN U CLICK ON THEM.. PS IS HAVING TROUBLES AGAIN WITH THE SITE ..
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Francine Roberts
Date: 10/7/2012 9:34:00 PM
no troubles from this side, I can access them from the new poems section or by clicking on my name, there have been comments on two out of the four
Date: 10/7/2012 8:58:00 PM
THANKXXX FRANCINE FOR MY WIN AND PLACE .. AM SO HONORED U ENJOYED MY WORDS OF ENTRY .. IT MADE MY EVENING TO DISCOVER I WAS ON WINNERS LIST AS U ALWAYS PRESENT TREMENDOUS CHALLENGES IN YOUR THEMES .. AND TODAY WE BAPTIZED MY NEW GRANDSON AND EVERYONE JUST LEFT FROM OUR FAMILY PARTY FOR HIM.. HE WAS AN ANGEL ALL DAY WITH ALL THE ACTIVITY AND HUGS AND KISSES LUV .. SO AGAIN THANKXXX.. LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHALLENGE ..
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Date: 10/7/2012 11:52:00 AM
lovely couplets, Francine. Thanks - loved the contest : ) And a very happy Thanksgiving for tomorrow x
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:03:00 PM
I see what Debbie meant, it does want to be a sonnet. You have a good turning point (volta) and an alternate viewpoint from the start. Much better than most of my attempts.
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Date: 10/4/2012 6:35:00 PM
I feel deeply about this piece and can relate to it. But not as a mother.
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Date: 10/4/2012 5:01:00 PM
touching write Francine .. a lilting beginning to a solemn ending .. so creative and winning wishes luv .. in dreams we all can imagine good things ..
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:13:00 PM
This is sooo touching...excellent write!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 3:05:00 PM
So heart wretching! Give us 2 more lines and make it a sonnet [it told me it wants to be one ;)] hmmm use lines 9 & 10 as the last two and give 11 & 12 two more lines? Of course it is fine just how it is..I'm just babbling HUGS Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:47:00 PM
wow, I wrote a sonnet one time about daisy chains and losing an old friend to death. I often see you on my own wave length. Marvelous poem.
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:31:00 PM
I can feel your pain in this one..Very emotive work..I hope just a work and not an actual happening in your life..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2012 8:14:00 PM
Ah! A beautiful verse, even in its sadness. May the good memories bring you a special kind of peace some day as you recall those joyful, sweet memories you write about here. Peace and love! Cynthia
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Date: 9/27/2012 12:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:21:00 PM
What a beautifully touching poem.
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:15:00 PM
Hi Francine, this is a sadly beautiful poem, wonderful writing and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Autumn Acrostic Contest. I am very honoured. Love Constance
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:00:00 PM
A sad, but very lovely write. Well-crafted verses.
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Date: 9/19/2012 3:32:00 PM
so sad but very touching, too...
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Date: 9/19/2012 7:10:00 AM
This is a perfect write for the contest, if it is for the 'in dreams' contest, you have done excellent with this poem! I really enjoyed this well written and majorly delightful write! Such a fascinating poem Francine, I love how you you used the night and the light woven into the write! Wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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Francine Roberts
Date: 9/19/2012 9:52:00 AM
let's just call it an example for the contest, I can't exactly enter it as its my contest
Date: 9/19/2012 12:14:00 AM
very touching poem here Francine.Very nice couplet.
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