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Daily Long Passionate Goodbye

Other wives watched Shirley kiss her husband good-bye. Every Monday through Friday at the train station. As if it was going to be the last good-bye. They could not understand it, not knowing the full story. One day Shirley and her man stopped coming to the train. Was he no longer going to work? Was he on vacation? He had passed from colon cancer, they discovered later. Better understanding now those long passionate goodbyes.

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Date: 8/22/2023 2:25:00 PM
My friends always call it the Brotherton Goodbyes. Filled with hugs and kisses and goodbyes from the house to the car. Sometimes a goodbye can last 10 to 15 minutes.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2023 5:16:00 AM
I see this with one parent and his two sons - a long elaborate show for the school staff

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