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Birds roost; the sun sets, The day ends and sleeps, The moon up high, It lights the sky; stars peep. Written By Mandy Tams Entry for David Williams Twenty/Twenty Used 20 words and 20 syllables

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2012 4:05:00 PM

i'm here again, i've just remembered, i just could not do this contest at all, i really like this...

Jessica K

Date: 3/7/2012 12:12:00 PM

Wonderful job, Mandy! Congrats on your win

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 6:34:00 AM

Congrats Golden Girl! A lovely description of nightfall. Blessings, Rhonda

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 10:44:00 AM

This made me smile and reminded me to appreciate what we could see daily, Mandy! Super congrats on your win :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 10:49:00 AM

thanks nikko somtimes we take things for granted and it helps just slow us a bit to appreciate what we have xx

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 7:34:00 AM

Congrats, Mandy. Excellent well deserved win. Thanks for your comments. hugs, Ralph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Ralph much appreciated xxooxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:49:00 PM

MANDY... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2012 5:38:00 PM

Great flow to this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/2/2012 4:40:00 PM

congrats Mandy, wonderful winner. harry

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:05:00 PM

Mandy, such a great use of 20 words. Your talent is inspiring, wonderful work. Congrats on winning David's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/2/2012 10:55:00 AM

and so the world turns aye? Congrad's Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:46:00 AM

super cheers to you for the grand win,mandy!.:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:13:00 AM

wonderfully creative Mandy.. major congrats on a winning wonder and first place too luv..

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/2/2012 7:52:00 AM

congrats on a well-deserved win!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2012 6:22:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Mandy.Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/2/2012 6:27:00 AM

Thanks Kash xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2012 3:46:00 PM

I think you did GREAT with your 20 words. How will he ever judge this contest???

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 5:42:00 PM

cute picture - are you allowed to use punctuation? it would help the flow. also, roost? I really like how the stars peep, like the birds in the beginning. very clever :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/25/2012 12:32:00 PM

a knock-out, mandy... grrreat job!..:) winning huggs!