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Daggers

Knives which cut through the turgid atmosphere Arrayed on our shelf like bowling pins in an alley Long forgotten quarrels have left their mark on the terrain and on we(ourselves) The deepening red of an autumn sun Pours through my window like a fox searching for its prey The daggers tempt us We are left alone with them Our sorrow runs through the afternoon On into the evening When the light fades we turn towards the shining knives Take hold of one Slice the night in two!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/8/2010 9:31:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations Matthew, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem "Daggers". 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Matthew. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:00:00 PM
congrad's a well deserved win! Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:56:00 AM
Dear Matthew, Congratulations! And best wishes in advancing to the final round. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:27:00 PM
Another honor for this poem. Congratulations on having this poem make it to the finals. Good luck in the next round. Karen
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Matthew! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:38:00 AM
Powerful write..loved the "fox"...hope all is well. Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:28:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:41:00 PM
Vivid imagery for a thought provoking poem. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matthew. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:11:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:42:00 PM
fantastic symbolizm...shhhhh..check the contest winners Baby! shhhhhh Light & Love
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Date: 5/30/2009 7:02:00 AM
Brilliant Matthew. I know those daggers well myself. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/30/2009 3:34:00 AM
I know this red poem very well, and it hurts, that pain. well written, love, Kristin
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:08:00 PM
The remorse over "long forgotten quarrels" can cut like a "dagger," Matthew. And the more time we spend alone with these regrets, the worse we feel. Very touching write, Matthew! Love, Carolyn
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