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Dagger of Love

I may not always write about you, About the way your energy, Caresses my spine, And sends jolts of electrity, Racing through my body, Exploding each cell like fireworks. I may not write about, The way my dreams at night, Fill with you and I dancing, Heat bashing our skin, Filling us with an unquencable need, Touch beconing a new meaning. I may not write about, The way your eyes stare into mine, Past the years I have seen, And into the soul that I am, Spirit colliding with spirt, Melting together like Iron to form a sword. I may not write about, A love that we experience, Through star strewed skies, And blood soaked ground, That causes even the fearful sight, Of bombs exploding to look beautiful. I may not write about you and I, How I fill up your soul and your mind, With thoughts and words and images, That melt and form new words, Your lovely muse who so beguiles you, With a double bladed sword. But Darling, don't let your heart, Get away from itself, Don't let your heart take the fall. The wound I cause shall soon heal, And you will read words, Of another man, dancing with me, Of another man, touching my soul, His finger tips brushing the sides, Of my breasts, his lips trailing down my neck, Whispering with the heat of hells fires, All that could be between, his and mine. You will read lines that speak, Of a sensual romance, Pools and puddles of lust between thighs, And an ancient sweetness, That rivals Greek Ambrosia. It is no fault of your own, You have fallen and I have shown you, The sharp dagger of my love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/2/2014 6:17:00 PM
Fantastic structure and amazing depths and love in this one. Your poetry is very captivating. You've sucked me in with the art of your words..."Pools and puddles of lust between thighs, And an ancient sweetness, That rivals Greek Ambrosia. " Love those lines! Wow! Always,Laura
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:11:00 PM
You write with passion, like no other. It's not easy, writing for the one's who are need. Enjoyed...LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:02:00 AM
" Heat bashing our skin, filling us with an unquenchable need, touch becoming a new meaning..." your intimacy of expression is so stiring Jay. Passion will not ruin a true soul. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:03:00 PM
Her nature is so passionate and carniverous, so beautifully resolute to capture new lust, and love. She is tender and terrible. I would think the other lover in this poem would be triumphant in knowing that his love cant be surpassed Jay. Warrior lovers, so honorably hewn in this brutally beautiful poem. A FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/15/2014 5:02:00 AM
SOOO beautifully written by a beautiful poet, i loved reading it twice... romantic and in depth writing at the same time... HUGs Friend Always.... malik
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