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~9/9/23

Daffodill sheer trumpets Dearest friendships you gift Doused miles of sweet scent Dozens charm in bouquets Darned bright in raven hair Deck gardens in yellow Delicate fresh flower

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/11/2023 10:45:00 AM

Anaya, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions and shades. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, that it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/11/2023 1:16:00 PM

Your beautiful comments are the encouragement I need and satisfactorily edifying especially for my morality. Thank you, Sotto Poet much appreciated. Anaya

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/10/2023 6:10:00 AM

Oh woww, this is such a splendid and heartfelt take for the pleiades form contest and you've brilliantly reflected your wise poetical eloquence dear! The lines are scented with the delightful ambience of daffodils and my heart feels mesmerized by your eloquent words.. "Dearest friendships you gift" Very true.. "Darned bright jn raven hair", "dozens charm in bouquets" You've really shown a very cosmic vividness here and I'm in awe of your beautiful talent.. Just wow :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/10/2023 3:13:00 PM

Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/10/2023 3:31:00 AM

This is beautiful Anaya. ‘Darned bright in raven hair’. Glorious! Your poetry is so creative, imaginative, well crafted and inspiring. Good luck in the competition. Blessings to you.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/10/2023 2:18:00 PM

Thank you, Christina, it's an honor coming from you an amazing poetess! Thanks for the luck...warmest wishes...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2023 1:27:00 AM

Splendid Pleiades, dear Anaya. Excellent use of sight and smell. Daffodils are such lovely flowers. Best for a win.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/10/2023 3:08:00 PM

They are, dear Victor. Yellow flowers mean friendship...I give you my bouquet. ;D

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/9/2023 8:05:00 PM

This is lovely Anaya. It reads like a beautiful poem, even if it wasn't compelled to begin with D. BOL it will do well. Best wishes my friend. SV

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/10/2023 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, S.V. it means a lot coming from you. Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2023 7:26:00 PM

Ah this is absolutely stunning. How gorgeous is your flow, seamless and i love every line here especially deck line and friendships. Deep and heartfelt this is. One could write so creatively for pleiades you’ve shown that. Goodluck for the contest Stay blessed talented poetess

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/10/2023 3:16:00 PM

Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D