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Daddy's Overalls

My daddy was my loved hero when I was a tiny sprite. To walk along beside him, was for me a great delight. I loved the swish of overalls as he carried in the milk. To me the sound was sweeter than the soft rustle of silk. I wondered why my sock clad legs would not make that unique sound. But it really didn’t matter when my daddy was around. I vowed he would be like Daddy, the only kind I’d marry. I’d hear the swish of overalls as the foaming milk he’d carry. Although that was not to happen in spite of my big talk, I dressed my son in overalls the day he learned to walk. By: Joyce Johnson Won a second in Jeans contest (they weren't called jeans in Daddy's day.) For Nette Onclaud's contest "It's In the Jeans"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/15/2011 5:25:00 PM
I just love it, Joyce. never thought of the overalls angle. beautifully incorporated into this heart warming write. masterful
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:53:00 PM
So good to hear of such a good relationship with your father that you wanted your son to be in his image...Congrats...Sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:35:00 AM
Dear Joyce, I'm so glad this wonderful poem placed high. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:44:00 AM
LOL, Many congrats to you, Joyce : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:00:00 AM
Many congrats Joyce on your fabulous win,,Loved reading this very original write..and men came original during those days today's ones cannot hold a candle to them.What a beautiful tribute to your daddy...huggs from me for this great write!!
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:28:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of nette
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:51:00 AM
just a great memory and such a great ending, nothing as statisfying as a good ending! Congrad's Light ^ Love
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:25:00 AM
A lovely, warm write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful write here Joyce.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:47:00 PM
Great win in the Jeans babe lots of very good entrys....You must be a distant cousin hehe. cheers babe, Don
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:24:00 PM
ahhh, this is so sweet. Relating them to your daddy and your son. What a cool way to recall happy memories of those men in your life. Congrats on your win with this fine poem, Joyce.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super second place win in the contest..with this tender write my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:38:00 PM
such a sensitive write Joyce .. a true treasure my friend.. my Grandpa wore overalls my Mom told me he always called them that.. not jeans either.. good luck in the contest .. our Daddy's gave us such special memories..luv.. good luck...
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:27:00 PM
this was awesome and so creative.. good luck your friend cory
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful dedication and tribute to your dad with the memories recollected now in tranquility, Joyce. Good luck inthe contest.
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:27:00 PM
Such wonderful memories of your father, Joyce. I always wanted to meet a man like my father as well. Had a great chuckle reading the last two lines. Fabulous entry for Nette's contest, dear. I hope she enjoys it as much as I did. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:56:00 PM
a great piece you wrote, very creative write.
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