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Daddy I

daddy I sure do remember how you were so very proud how you were so very virile how you were so very strong daddy I got a weird feeling that something somehow isn't right that something somehow's out of place that something somehow doesn't fit daddy I was just wondering is this what it's really about is this what it really comes to is this how it really all ends daddy I got a strange question why do you stare straight ahead why do your eyes look so vacant why do you not know my name...

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Date: 3/14/2014 1:43:00 AM
Tim, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:32:00 PM
oh I hope this is not your true relationship. It is so sad. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:50:00 PM
tim, you got me!.. what a sensitive write!.. congrats big time and huggs!
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, tim
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:47:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Tim . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:45:00 AM
Tim, this poem really hit home with me, as it immediately recalled a news story this week of a 4 year old found with his dead mother in an apartment. Great job! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:31:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2013 5:38:00 PM
Tim, i love this poem... very sad ... reminds me of my other.... wish life had better endings... always...pd
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Date: 3/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
Eloquent words that are penned in a very moving way.
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Date: 3/19/2013 7:11:00 AM
Oh my Tim thats a sad one ....Seren
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