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Daddy I

daddy I sure do remember
how you were so very proud
how you were so very virile
how you were so very strong

daddy I got a weird feeling
that something somehow isn't right
that something somehow's out of place
that something somehow doesn't fit

daddy I was just wondering
is this what it's really about
is this what it really comes to
is this how it really all ends

daddy I got a strange question
why do you stare straight ahead
why do your eyes look so vacant
why do you not know my name...

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 1:43:00 AM
    Tim, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:40:00 PM
    Life beats us up.. We must cherish the moments and pass out our flowers this side of the grave. Beautiful, heart wrenching poem Tim, I'm a softy so these daddy poems are tearing me up and yours, well, yeah. Praying peace and comfort over you and all you love tonight!

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:32:00 PM
    oh I hope this is not your true relationship. It is so sad. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 12:50:00 PM
    tim, you got me!.. what a sensitive write!.. congrats big time and huggs!

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:01:00 AM
    Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, tim

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:47:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend Tim . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Tim, this poem really hit home with me, as it immediately recalled a news story this week of a 4 year old found with his dead mother in an apartment. Great job! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 8:31:00 PM
    Tim, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Tim, i love this poem... very sad ... reminds me of my other.... wish life had better endings... always...pd

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Eloquent words that are penned in a very moving way.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Oh my Tim thats a sad one ....Seren